Alison read the note, smiled and inmediatly put on her coat. She knew that those was the moment. The moment to leave it all and run, only run. She took a taxi and only pronounced some words: – To the airport, please. She was thinking about the note, that yellow note. Only 5 words, but how important could be only 5 words, some letters linked with any sense aparently. But was the meaning of her life. She reached the airport and try to find… Vecine. She ran to the travel agency, but someone touched her back. He gave her the ticket, and kissed her lips. The note fell to the ground from the girl’s hand. “7.00 pm, Venice. I love you”
This is my micro tale: "She is happy, funny, untamable, complete, no longer scared... tearing the kisses away from her face, that her best friend shared."
'Where's mommy, dad?' 'Running errands, my girl,' he said, hiding the disunion papers behind him. His bank account was teeming that day... his heart empty.
He was insanely handsome. I asked him if i could buy him a drink but he rolled his eyes and brushed me off. He hurt my feelings and I followed him home.
María Bugarín Cámara 1 BACH D PATIENTE. While he was convinced that good things come to those who can wait, as they kept looking at the clock at the intervals of one minute than you seemed an eternity.
- Happy St Valentine's Day, wanted! - his new boyfriend said to him while it was giving him an enormous box of chocolates of chocolate, and she, after kissing it and to be grateful for him for his gift, took hold, with tremulous hands, one of the chocolates and I take it to the mouth; in spite of the fact that it knew of that it was allergic to the chocolate. End.
Today I woke up and I couldn't stop thinking about him. He's on my mind, all the time. I decided to brush my teeth after eating at least twice, even though my teeth were perfect. I just wanted to look good. As soon as I went out, something hit me like a train, it was the sunlight. It was weird because where I live is always cloudy. I wasn't used to sunny days but I liked it anyways, I only got upset because I wore a sweater in vain. As always, I went to school, happy because I could see him, so I was smiling until a car almost killed me. Since then, I know it's not good to be happy all the time.
Whereas he was happening his nights sleeping with his clean well conscience as if it was not making anything bad; his wife and another woman were passing the nights crying, one without being able to sleep for the fear and the anxiety of which some day he out of his side, and other one without being able to sleep for the sadness and frustration of which he was never going to be completely to his side.
H. His lips. His smile. His hair. His smell. His style. His character. Him. Someone said that it is insane, but it is not obsession, it is everything that i've seen and it is everything that i know.
First, I would like to start with Aida Arcos' micro tale. It has the bohemian feel which I personally like it. Like other earthly pleasures, smoking transports people to another world. One prohibited. Shuang Zeng's micro tale: What I understand in this story is the following situation: A father gives a dog to his son. A dog that was highly desired. I' m not a fan of the dog-,man friendship, but I understand that is something beautiful, full of fidelity.
Manu de la Cruz's micro tale: I don´t like cheesy love stories. Even so, I appreciate his micro tale and I enjoy it.
Mari Carmen Martínez's micro tale: I'm speechless. This is my favourite micro tale. There are many people who we think we know, but, is it really so?
María José Requena's micro tale: It's intimate. "I gave everything and got nothing" The cruelty of the world itself.
REVIEWS I would like to start with Mariana Portillo’s micro-tale because I know the person who did she write about it and I think the same as her. You don’t need to be obsessed with a person to take care about him or just simply because you love him. Why it is insane to love a person that is not next to you? You don’t need to be be physically next to someone to love and take care of him, and that person who is far away from you can help you more than the ones who are next to you. Let’s stop saying silliness about this please and start being more open-minded.
Lucia Escribano’s one. This tale makes you think about it. I think the tale is about a beautiful woman, with inner beauty and external beauty. But everybody only wants to have sex with her and they don’t care about her personality, feelings, fears… In conclusion who she is. But there is a man who cares about how she is inside, but she hasn’t notice it yet. I think it can be a request for people to look forward a person who loves you because of how you are inside, and not for how are you physically.
Aida Arcos’s micro-tale. This tale has got different points of view if you take a few minutes to think about it, but for me, the clearly one is a depressed person. Maybe this person is sad because his problems stop him and he can’t move on from them. He feels alone and surely nobody take care of him. He has also got fears, like everybody, but he probably is more weak and he needs support. I also believe that ‘the fog’ refers to the smoke that he is creating, and it symbolises a lonely road when you are lost and you don’t know where are you going.
Mm Martínez’s micro-tale. This tale is a revealed truth. It is true that we all have got about four parts of us. The first one, which everyone knows about; the second one, which only knows about our nearest and dearest people; the third one, which only us know about; and the fourth, which nobody, ourselves either, know about. So thinking about this, you should admit that you don’t know about a person too much, and that a knowing person can surprises you badly.
Finally, David Ventura’s one. This tale shocks you because when you are reading it you didn’t expect the final. It mixes many feelings, in mi opinion, like happiness, nervousness… But the main thing is that this tale teach you an important clue for your life: happiness blinds us. When you are in love, as this girl or boy, you are only thinking about the other person and you don’t pay attention to the others things around you. This blinds. Pay too much attention to one thing is dangerous and it is important to ‘wake up’ from this fog that blinds people, because it can kill you. It is heard to heard, but it is true.
Alison read the note, smiled and inmediatly put on her coat. She knew that those was the moment. The moment to leave it all and run, only run. She took a taxi and only pronounced some words:
– To the airport, please.
She was thinking about the note, that yello note. Only 5 words, but how important could be only 5 words, some letters linked with any sense aparently. But was the meaning of her life.
She reached the airport and try to find… Vecine. She ran to the travel agency, but someone touched her back. He gave her the ticket, and kissed her lips. The note fell to the ground fron the girl’s hand.
I'm going to star with Meri's micro tale. It's one of my favourites. I don't really know why, but when i read it I was impressed. Anger is one of the most awful feelings in the world and that micro tale perfectly reflects that. Ana's micro tale is also one of my favourites tales. It's very sad and deep. Mariana's micro tale is very simple but in a few lines it describes one of the most weird and wonderful feeling that we all have felt once in our life times; love. That feeling that you have when you see someone and you feel that a starnger becomes your everything. Maria's Bugarín micro tale is also one of my favourites ones. Patient. We are always doing things; we're busy with homework, with our daily activities and sometimes all that we need is patient. When we having such a good time the time flies really fast, but when we're for example at school it's feels like an eternity so we just need to relax and be patient.
I like the micro tales of shuang zeng, because child is happy by his new friend, and he isn't think that his father buy a dog. I like the father that he is considerate wiht his son. I think that the micro tales of ana talk about lies that parents say of their sons for they don't worry. It is a real situation that happen in real life. It is worry and too sad. The micro tales of maria bugarin tolk about person that they are patient and think that they want come immediately. I think that it is true. I think that the micro tales of maria lopez is beautiful, because she knowing that she was allergic to chocolat she eat beacuse she love his boyfriend. The micro tales of julia is too sad because the man was with two women at once, and he doesn't think their feelings. I think that it is sad and wicked.
My opinion One of my favourite is Aida Arcos´s micro tale because i Could understand it and i love Stephen king. Another micro tale that impressed me was "There once was a girl known by everyone and no one" ´cause i identified with it. I can say that i would chose Ana Serrano´s micro tale for best because it makes you think about the life and everything.
In my opinion, my favorite micro tale that speaks Lucia is a nice way for a woman. I also like the micro tale of inma because it is a text similar to Lucia. Talk describing a woman romantic way. The micro tale of Shuang I also like it because it tells about the friendship that can exist between a child and an animal. The micro tale of Aida I do not like it because it does not express any positivism. And finally, the micro tale of ana seems a sad and pessimistic text. I do not like much. In conclusion, the micro tale that I liked most is that of Lucia.
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ResponderEliminarAlison read the note, smiled and inmediatly put on her coat. She knew that those was the moment. The moment to leave it all and run, only run. She took a taxi and only pronounced some words:
ResponderEliminar– To the airport, please.
She was thinking about the note, that yellow note. Only 5 words, but how important could be only 5 words, some letters linked with any sense aparently. But was the meaning of her life.
She reached the airport and try to find… Vecine. She ran to the travel agency, but someone touched her back. He gave her the ticket, and kissed her lips. The note fell to the ground from the girl’s hand.
“7.00 pm, Venice. I love you”
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EliminarIt's a great micro tale because I really like love stories and this very nice!
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ResponderEliminarHere's my micro tale:
ResponderEliminar"There once was a girl known by everyone and no one" by anonymous
Aida Arcos Martos.
ResponderEliminarSmoking in my room, staring at the ground, creating Stephen King's fog under my bed, in it my fears
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ResponderEliminarShe was a beautiful flower.
ResponderEliminarWhile everyone thought of plucking her the moment they saw her, he dreamt of nurturing her.
He was different.
In my opinion this is very beautiful tale because is touching
EliminarA very beautiful text you want to explain that we are all beautiful inside and not only by physical. I love it!
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ResponderEliminarThe little boy jumped with happiness, looked back at his parent in disbelief and run outside to his new friend who kept wagging its tail.
ResponderEliminarThis is my micro tale:
ResponderEliminar"She is happy, funny, untamable, complete, no longer scared...
tearing the kisses away from her face, that her best friend shared."
Ana Serrano Baena. 1º BTO A
ResponderEliminar'Where's mommy, dad?'
'Running errands, my girl,'
he said, hiding the disunion papers behind him.
His bank account was teeming that day...
his heart empty.
I really like because it's a reflexive history that it makes you think over on the feelings!
EliminarI think that this tale is too sad because they hiding the disunion.
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ResponderEliminarHe was insanely handsome. I asked him if i could buy him a drink but he rolled his eyes and brushed me off.
He hurt my feelings and I followed him home.
I don't like this tale becasuse it is very strange story about two people
EliminarI like this microtale because it's of love and is a topic that I quite like.
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ResponderEliminar"I had always believed I was a small piece of the sky. The world, however, has torn my wishes apart and chained me down to reality".
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EliminarI really have to say that is a very sad story because he awake from his dream and sees reality
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ResponderEliminarMaría Bugarín Cámara 1 BACH D
ResponderEliminarPATIENTE.
While he was convinced that good things come to those who can wait, as they kept looking at the clock at the intervals of one minute than you seemed an eternity.
LOVING SACRIFICE
ResponderEliminar- Happy St Valentine's Day, wanted! - his new boyfriend said to him while it was giving him an enormous box of chocolates of chocolate, and she, after kissing it and to be grateful for him for his gift, took hold, with tremulous hands, one of the chocolates and I take it to the mouth; in spite of the fact that it knew of that it was allergic to the chocolate. End.
Enemy affront
ResponderEliminarfully loaded guns,
emptied in is chest...
anger still burns.
Today I woke up and I couldn't stop thinking about him. He's on my mind, all the time. I decided to brush my teeth after eating at least twice, even though my teeth were perfect. I just wanted to look good. As soon as I went out, something hit me like a train, it was the sunlight. It was weird because where I live is always cloudy. I wasn't used to sunny days but I liked it anyways, I only got upset because I wore a sweater in vain. As always, I went to school, happy because I could see him, so I was smiling until a car almost killed me. Since then, I know it's not good to be happy all the time.
ResponderEliminarTHE LOVING TRIANGLE
ResponderEliminarWhereas he was happening his nights sleeping with his clean well conscience as if it was not making anything bad; his wife and another woman were passing the nights crying, one without being able to sleep for the fear and the anxiety of which some day he out of his side, and other one without being able to sleep for the sadness and frustration of which he was never going to be completely to his side.
H.
ResponderEliminarHis lips.
His smile.
His hair.
His smell.
His style.
His character.
Him.
Someone said that it is insane, but it is not obsession, it is everything that i've seen and it is everything that i know.
This is my favourite micro tale! It's a excellent micro tale because with few words it describes many feelings that we all feel ever in our life.
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ResponderEliminarLaura Rodríguez Aguilera
ResponderEliminarFirst, I would like to start with Aida Arcos' micro tale. It has the bohemian feel which I personally like it. Like other earthly pleasures, smoking transports people to another world. One prohibited.
Shuang Zeng's micro tale: What I understand in this story is the following situation: A father gives a dog to his son. A dog that was highly desired. I' m not a fan of the dog-,man friendship, but I understand that is something beautiful, full of fidelity.
Manu de la Cruz's micro tale: I don´t like cheesy love stories. Even so, I appreciate his micro tale and I enjoy it.
Mari Carmen Martínez's micro tale: I'm speechless. This is my favourite micro tale. There are many people who we think we know, but, is it really so?
María José Requena's micro tale: It's intimate. "I gave everything and got nothing" The cruelty of the world itself.
Ana Serrano Baena 1º BTO A
ResponderEliminarREVIEWS
I would like to start with Mariana Portillo’s micro-tale because I know the person who did she write about it and I think the same as her. You don’t need to be obsessed with a person to take care about him or just simply because you love him. Why it is insane to love a person that is not next to you? You don’t need to be be physically next to someone to love and take care of him, and that person who is far away from you can help you more than the ones who are next to you. Let’s stop saying silliness about this please and start being more open-minded.
Lucia Escribano’s one. This tale makes you think about it. I think the tale is about a beautiful woman, with inner beauty and external beauty. But everybody only wants to have sex with her and they don’t care about her personality, feelings, fears… In conclusion who she is. But there is a man who cares about how she is inside, but she hasn’t notice it yet. I think it can be a request for people to look forward a person who loves you because of how you are inside, and not for how are you physically.
Aida Arcos’s micro-tale. This tale has got different points of view if you take a few minutes to think about it, but for me, the clearly one is a depressed person. Maybe this person is sad because his problems stop him and he can’t move on from them. He feels alone and surely nobody take care of him. He has also got fears, like everybody, but he probably is more weak and he needs support. I also believe that ‘the fog’ refers to the smoke that he is creating, and it symbolises a lonely road when you are lost and you don’t know where are you going.
Mm Martínez’s micro-tale. This tale is a revealed truth. It is true that we all have got about four parts of us. The first one, which everyone knows about; the second one, which only knows about our nearest and dearest people; the third one, which only us know about; and the fourth, which nobody, ourselves either, know about. So thinking about this, you should admit that you don’t know about a person too much, and that a knowing person can surprises you badly.
Finally, David Ventura’s one. This tale shocks you because when you are reading it you didn’t expect the final. It mixes many feelings, in mi opinion, like happiness, nervousness… But the main thing is that this tale teach you an important clue for your life: happiness blinds us. When you are in love, as this girl or boy, you are only thinking about the other person and you don’t pay attention to the others things around you. This blinds. Pay too much attention to one thing is dangerous and it is important to ‘wake up’ from this fog that blinds people, because it can kill you. It is heard to heard, but it is true.
Alison read the note, smiled and inmediatly put on her coat. She knew that those was the moment. The moment to leave it all and run, only run. She took a taxi and only pronounced some words:
ResponderEliminar– To the airport, please.
She was thinking about the note, that yello note. Only 5 words, but how important could be only 5 words, some letters linked with any sense aparently. But was the meaning of her life.
She reached the airport and try to find… Vecine. She ran to the travel agency, but someone touched her back. He gave her the ticket, and kissed her lips. The note fell to the ground fron the girl’s hand.
I'm going to star with Meri's micro tale. It's one of my favourites. I don't really know why, but when i read it I was impressed. Anger is one of the most awful feelings in the world and that micro tale perfectly reflects that. Ana's micro tale is also one of my favourites tales. It's very sad and deep. Mariana's micro tale is very simple but in a few lines it describes one of the most weird and wonderful feeling that we all have felt once in our life times; love. That feeling that you have when you see someone and you feel that a starnger becomes your everything. Maria's Bugarín micro tale is also one of my favourites ones. Patient. We are always doing things; we're busy with homework, with our daily activities and sometimes all that we need is patient. When we having such a good time the time flies really fast, but when we're for example at school it's feels like an eternity so we just need to relax and be patient.
ResponderEliminarMy opinions
ResponderEliminarI like the micro tales of shuang zeng, because child is happy by his new friend, and he isn't think that his father buy a dog. I like the father that he is considerate wiht his son.
I think that the micro tales of ana talk about lies that parents say of their sons for they don't worry. It is a real situation that happen in real life. It is worry and too sad.
The micro tales of maria bugarin tolk about person that they are patient and think that they want come immediately. I think that it is true.
I think that the micro tales of maria lopez is beautiful, because she knowing that she was allergic to chocolat she eat beacuse she love his boyfriend.
The micro tales of julia is too sad because the man was with two women at once, and he doesn't think their feelings. I think that it is sad and wicked.
My opinion
ResponderEliminarOne of my favourite is Aida Arcos´s micro tale because i Could understand it and i love Stephen king. Another micro tale that impressed me was "There once was a girl known by everyone and no one" ´cause i identified with it. I can say that i would chose Ana Serrano´s micro tale for best because it makes you think about the life and everything.
This is my micro tale:
ResponderEliminarHe looked at her with love... and said, ''you look beautiful tonight.'' She smiled, from the picture on the wall.
Rocío Pérez González.
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ResponderEliminarIn my opinion, my favorite micro tale that speaks Lucia is a nice way for a woman. I also like the micro tale of inma because it is a text similar to Lucia. Talk describing a woman romantic way. The micro tale of Shuang I also like it because it tells about the friendship that can exist between a child and an animal. The micro tale of Aida I do not like it because it does not express any positivism. And finally, the micro tale of ana seems a sad and pessimistic text. I do not like much. In conclusion, the micro tale that I liked most is that of Lucia.
ResponderEliminarRocío Pérez González.
DARK LOVE
ResponderEliminarHe didn’t fall in love with her, but with her shadow. He looked for her at sunset, when his beloved was longer.